Life is just like an ocean which keeps moving without any end. .
Nothing what comes in our lives is forever, at the end what remains is just the memories of some who touched us like waves. . .
gud wrk ashu...bt u cud make it mor intrstng with adding sm mor stuffs...in dis i missed the smthng..dat excitmnt dat i had for the 1ast 2 parts.....but its attractive in its own way, since it all comes deep frm ur heart... go ahead... ashu... :)
Anonymous said…
Nice one.... :)
Anonymous said…
Nice one.... :)
Anonymous said…
gud job... :-) bt you could hav ended it a lil mor romantically... it ws a sudden endin.. felt lyk wanna read more... ur qoutes wr simply awsm... i lykd ur cute angel, :-) -twinkle
gud one da ashu...but u cud add sm mor stuffs for makng it mor intrstng,..dis tym i missed smthng in it...the excitement dat i had in wyl reading the last two parts..but its gud ashu...since it all cums deep frm ur heart v cud c all dat scene by scene clearly...gud wrk..go ahead..
ashu....let me be a critic for nw...u hav done a really wonderful job....thnx...gud work....go ahead...my friend...&..on the other side i will tell..the endin part was a bit sudden....u culd have taken it more of a slow kind..u know...adding more emotions...etc..etc...nd the best part is u havent written any negative kind of feelin or never tried to express hatred...or so...i could see only love love..and love.. there.....thanx...really njoyed readin it...GUD!!!!:)
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